{ "version": "screenplay_writing_strategy.v1", "generated_at": "2026-04-11T11:22:30.426007Z", "meta": { "candidate_run_dir": "/wwwb/aitools/writer/outputs/hongloumeng_acceptance_smoke_20260331_v1", "screenplay_path": "/wwwb/aitools/writer/outputs/hongloumeng_acceptance_smoke_20260331_v1/03d_screenplay.json", "consultant_path": "outputs/script_consultant/script_consultant_current.json", "screenplay_contract_version": "screenplay.v2" }, "strategy_contract": [ { "rule_id": "retain_subject_anchor", "layer": "screenplay_text", "severity": "fail", "description": "当 block 已绑定角色时，正文应显式保留至少一个角色主体锚点，避免主体在前链即被抹平。" }, { "rule_id": "retain_action_anchor", "layer": "screenplay_text", "severity": "warn", "description": "正文应包含可表演的动作锚点，而不是只有抽象结果或背景说明。" }, { "rule_id": "retain_location_anchor", "layer": "screenplay_text_or_stage_direction", "severity": "warn", "description": "当 block 已绑定地点时，正文或短舞台提示应保留地点锚点，支撑下游空间理解。" }, { "rule_id": "dialogue_attribution_ready", "layer": "screenplay_text", "severity": "fail", "description": "当正文写入直接引语时，必须保留可识别的说话人归属，避免对白内容可读但说话者不清。" }, { "rule_id": "avoid_abstract_summary_prose", "layer": "precheck", "severity": "warn", "description": "避免把正文写成编年摘要、流程梗概、模板占位句或抽象压力标签，降低后续 prompt retention 修补压力。" } ], "consultant_focus": { "used": true, "source_path": "outputs/script_consultant/script_consultant_current.json", "confidence": "high", "writing_direction": [ "基于已验证的高收益repair动作反向定义剧本写作前置规范，从源头减少后续repair成本", "推行Dramart结构化要求与Seedance 2.0镜头生成要求双对齐的写作标准", "优先落地可被prompt_guard自动校验的通用写作规则，支撑批量生产", "建立剧本片段与后续镜头生成参数的标准化映射规则，降低中间转换损耗" ], "writing_method": [ "每个剧本段落前置标注标准化场景属性：时间、空间、氛围、核心角色站位", "动作描述采用「角色+具体动作+环境交互」三段式结构，无模糊指代", "对话内容单独标注说话人、标准化情绪标签、伴随动作三类辅助信息", "每个段落结尾标注可被机器识别的镜头类型标签（全景/中景/特写等）" ], "next_actions": [ "基于现有高收益repair动作输出通用版剧本写作规范手册", "开发剧本写作前置自动校验工具，对接prompt_guard实现合规性预检查", "完成通用写作规范的小批量测试验证，统计repair率下降幅度", "将验证有效的写作规范回灌至前链剧本生成的prompt模板中" ] }, "summary": { "status": "warn", "block_count": 17, "pass_block_count": 8, "warn_block_count": 9, "fail_block_count": 0, "pass_ratio": 0.470588, "warn_ratio": 0.529412, "fail_ratio": 0.0, "subject_anchor_gap_count": 0, "action_anchor_gap_count": 0, "location_anchor_gap_count": 0, "dialogue_attribution_gap_count": 0, "abstract_prose_risk_count": 9, "consultant_used": true, "consultant_confidence": "high", "next_fix_focus": [ "avoid_abstract_summary_prose" ], "status_reason": "warn_blocks_exceed_threshold" }, "checks": [ { "episode_id": "EP0001", "block_id": "EP0001B001", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0001" ], "character_names": [ "賈雨村", "雨村", "一僧一道", "二仙師", "女媧氏", "媧皇氏", "甄士隱", "空空道人" ], "location_names": [ "大荒山無稽崖", "青埂峰" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "fallback_placeholder", "abstract_performable_prose" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:fallback_placeholder", "abstract:abstract_performable_prose" ], "screenplay_preview": "（大荒山無稽崖）\n对话从对俗套文学的批判，转向对‘石头记’所载故事价值的初步肯定或好奇。\n空空道人先被眼前动静逼得停住，周围人的心也跟着提了起来。\n空空道人：将顽石变为美玉我先给你讲明白，听懂了再往下学。\n賈雨村：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n作者自述创作缘由（真事隐/假语村言）\n僧道对顽石的警告与顽石的执意请求。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0001", "block_id": "EP0001B002", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0004" ], "character_names": [ "空空道人", "情僧", "甄士隱", "封氏", "曹雪芹" ], "location_names": [ "葫蘆廟", "姑蘇", "閶門", "金陵" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": false, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "fallback_placeholder" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:fallback_placeholder" ], "screenplay_preview": "（葫蘆廟）\n空空道人抬手拦住曹雪芹，先把世，并交代书名演变一句句讲明。\n空空道人压着嗓子挤出一句：“满纸荒唐言，一把辛酸泪”\n曹雪芹披阅增删的交代。\n空空道人把这件事当场点头应了下来。\n空空道人对才子佳人小说的批判。\n书名从《石头记》到《情僧录》《风月宝鉴》《金陵十二钗》的演变。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0001", "block_id": "EP0001B003", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0005" ], "character_names": [ "一僧一道", "二仙師", "絳珠草", "絳珠仙子", "甄士隱", "英蓮", "神瑛侍者", "警幻仙子" ], "location_names": [ "太虛幻境" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "fallback_placeholder" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:fallback_placeholder" ], "screenplay_preview": "（太虛幻境）\n神瑛侍者：这层险处不是嘴上说说，真落到身上，躲不过就要伤身。\n一僧一道：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n士隐夏日伏案入梦。\n僧道谈论‘蠢物’与‘风流公案’。\n神瑛侍者把这件事当场点头应了下来。\n神瑛侍者灌溉绛珠草。\n绛珠仙子立下“以一生眼泪偿还灌溉之恩”的誓言，决定了宝黛爱情的核心悲剧模式。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0001", "block_id": "EP0001B004", "status": "pass", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0006" ], "character_names": [ "賈寶玉", "寶玉" ], "location_names": [ "太虛幻境" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [], "screenplay_preview": "（太虛幻境）\n賈寶玉：你既然不肯退，就把想问的话当面说出来。\n賈寶玉：我不想退，只想把‘蠢物’的对话当面问清。\n通灵宝玉的首次亮相（正面‘通灵宝玉’四字）\n太虚幻境牌坊的出现。\n通灵宝玉被僧道强行夺回，并瞬间转换至太虚幻境牌坊前。\n僧道对甄士隐‘跳出火坑’的警示。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0001", "block_id": "EP0001B005", "status": "pass", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0007" ], "character_names": [ "賈雨村", "時飛", "雨村", "小童", "甄家大丫鬟", "丫鬟" ], "location_names": [ "甄府", "甄家" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [], "screenplay_preview": "（甄府）\n賈雨村：你既然不肯退，就把想问的话当面说出来。\n甄家大丫鬟：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n雨村见丫鬟娇杏并产生误解。\n中秋夜甄士隐邀饮。\n雨村酒后叹道“行囊路费一概无措”\n雨村对月吟诗（两首）" }, { "episode_id": "EP0001", "block_id": "EP0001B006", "status": "pass", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0008" ], "character_names": [ "小童", "賈雨村", "雨村" ], "location_names": [ "甄府", "葫蘆廟", "封肃家" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": false, "dialogue_needs_attribution": false, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [], "screenplay_preview": "（甄府）\n甄士隐慷慨资助贾雨村银两和冬衣，助其进京赶考，二人畅饮至三更。 甄士隐…\n甄士隐的善心善行与后续接踵而至的无常厄运之间的内在冲突；理想（资助赶考）与现实（家破人亡）的残酷对照。\n葫芦庙失火，甄家被焚毁，从暂时悲痛（失女）陷入彻底破产无依的绝境。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0001", "block_id": "EP0001B007", "status": "pass", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0009" ], "character_names": [ "新太爺", "本府太爺", "太爺", "跛足道人", "瘋道人", "瘋跛道人", "甄家大丫鬟", "丫鬟", "封氏", "封肅", "冷子興", "子興", "公差", "那些人", "黛玉", "女學生" ], "location_names": [ "甄府", "甄家", "榮國府", "智通寺", "廟宇", "都中" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [], "screenplay_preview": "（甄府）\n跛足道人：唤我先给你讲明白，听懂了再往下学。\n甄家大丫鬟：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n跛足道人念《好了歌》。\n士隐注解《好了歌》。\n贾雨村在智通寺看到对联‘身后有余忘缩手，眼前无路想回头’，心生感慨。\n士隐随道人出家。\n贾雨村在智通寺看到对联‘身后有余忘缩手，眼前无路想回头’，心生感慨，预示其命运与选择，随后偶遇冷子兴。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0002", "block_id": "EP0002B001", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0013" ], "character_names": [ "賈雨村", "雨村", "冷子興", "子興" ], "location_names": [ "都中" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "abstract_performable_prose" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:abstract_performable_prose" ], "screenplay_preview": "（都中）\n賈雨村：递关键信息（贾府异事）我先给你讲明白，听懂了再往下学。\n冷子興：我愿意学，只求你先给我指条入门路。\n雨村与冷子兴酒肆巧遇。\n子兴提及贾府异事。\n子兴说出“倒是老先生你贵同宗家，出了一件小小的异事。”，将闲谈引向核心剧情线索。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0002", "block_id": "EP0002B002", "status": "pass", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0014" ], "character_names": [ "冷子興", "子興", "賈珍", "珍爺", "賈蓉", "賈复", "賈敬", "賈雨村", "雨村" ], "location_names": [ "榮國府", "榮府", "賈府", "宁國府", "都中", "石頭城", "金陵" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [], "screenplay_preview": "（榮國府）\n冷子興：这层险处不是嘴上说说，真落到身上，躲不过就要伤身。\n賈雨村：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n冷子兴评贾府'百足之虫，死而不僵'。\n介绍宁国府贾敬、贾珍、贾蓉三代状况。\n冷子兴说出'谁知这样钟鸣鼎食之家，翰墨诗书之族，如今的儿孙，竟一代不如一代了！'。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0002", "block_id": "EP0002B003", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0016" ], "character_names": [ "史老太君", "祖母", "王氏", "賈政", "賈赦", "賈雨村", "雨村", "賈寶玉", "寶玉", "冷子興", "子興", "迎春", "二小姐" ], "location_names": [ "榮國府", "榮府", "賈府", "宁國府", "宁府" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "abstract_performable_prose" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:abstract_performable_prose" ], "screenplay_preview": "（榮國府）\n賈寶玉：论述转化为可视、可听的我先给你讲明白，听懂了再往下学。\n賈雨村：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n贾宝玉含玉而生的具体描述（五彩晶莹，有字迹）\n抓周只取脂粉钗环的情节。\n“报喜信”的喊话声打断原有谈话。\n贾政的愤怒与史老太君的珍爱。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0002", "block_id": "EP0002B004", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0020" ], "character_names": [ "黛玉", "林黛玉", "林姑娘", "冷子興", "子興", "史老太君", "祖母", "賈母", "外祖母", "賈政", "賈赦", "王氏", "二舅母", "舅母", "甄家大丫鬟", "丫鬟", "邢氏", "邢夫人" ], "location_names": [ "榮國府", "宁國府" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": false, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "fallback_placeholder", "abstract_performable_prose" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:fallback_placeholder", "abstract:abstract_performable_prose" ], "screenplay_preview": "（榮國府）\n黛玉刚被推到这套门道里，礼数和人情就先一步压到了眼前。\n林如海写信推荐贾政。\n第三回标题视觉呈现。\n贾雨村得知起复消息。\n黛玉拜别父亲启程进京。\n黛玉‘步步留心，时时在意’的心理状态。\n贾赦托病不见的传话，这是黛玉首次直接感受到贾府长辈的疏离与借口，强化了她“寄人篱下”的初始认知。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0002", "block_id": "EP0002B005", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0024" ], "character_names": [ "黛玉", "史老太君", "賈母", "李氏", "賈珠之妻", "林如海", "如海", "探春", "迎春", "惜春", "賈寶玉", "寶玉", "表兄" ], "location_names": [ "榮禧堂" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "abstract_performable_prose" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:abstract_performable_prose" ], "screenplay_preview": "（榮禧堂）\n黛玉：你既然不肯退，就把想问的话当面说出来。\n史老太君：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n黛玉往前逼出一步，场上的人也都不能再装作没听见。\n黛玉压着嗓子挤出一句：“宝玉来了！”\n黛玉一踏进荣禧堂，先被眼前的排场压得放慢了脚步。\n镜头掠过荣禧堂匾额及陈设，压人的气势先把人镇住。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0002", "block_id": "EP0002B006", "status": "pass", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0026" ], "character_names": [ "黛玉", "林妹妹", "探春", "史老太君", "賈母", "賈寶玉", "寶玉" ], "location_names": [], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [], "screenplay_preview": "黛玉：你既然不肯退，就把想问的话当面说出来。\n探春：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n宝玉盛装出场与黛玉的初次视觉冲击。\n宝玉换装后与黛玉的正式相见。\n宝玉称“这个妹妹我曾见过的”对白。\n宝玉说出“这个妹妹我曾见过的”，将内心的熟悉感宣之于口，打破了社交客套。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0002", "block_id": "EP0002B007", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0027" ], "character_names": [ "黛玉", "林姑娘", "李嬤嬤", "乳母", "襲人", "珍珠", "王嬤嬤", "奶娘", "雪雁", "小丫頭", "探春", "迎春", "鸚哥" ], "location_names": [ "碧紗櫥" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "abstract_performable_prose" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:abstract_performable_prose" ], "screenplay_preview": "（碧紗櫥）\n黛玉：你既然不肯退，就把想问的话当面说出来。\n李嬤嬤：我不想退，只想把黛玉是否有玉当面问清。\n黛玉回答没有。\n宝玉摔玉的激烈动作与台词。\n宝玉摔玉。这是宝黛关系中第一个戏剧性高潮，彻底打破了初见时的含蓄。\n贾母安排黛玉暂住碧纱橱。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0003", "block_id": "EP0003B001", "status": "warn", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0028" ], "character_names": [ "黛玉", "林姑娘", "李嬤嬤", "襲人", "鸚哥", "史老太君", "賈母", "賈寶玉", "寶玉" ], "location_names": [ "碧紗櫥" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [ "abstract_performable_prose" ], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [ "abstract:abstract_performable_prose" ], "screenplay_preview": "（碧紗櫥）\n黛玉：你既然不肯退，就把想问的话当面说出来。\n李嬤嬤：我不想退，只想把夜晚，袭人探望未眠的黛玉当面问清。\n袭人忠心侍主的性格介绍。\n袭人夜探黛玉的对话。\n袭人主动夜探并安慰黛玉。\n黛玉因宝玉摔玉而自责的情绪。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0003", "block_id": "EP0003B002", "status": "pass", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0029" ], "character_names": [ "李氏", "賈珠之妻", "李紈", "宮裁", "門子", "小沙彌", "黛玉", "賈蘭", "原告", "賈雨村", "雨村", "王氏", "王夫人", "公差", "公人" ], "location_names": [ "金陵" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": false, "dialogue_needs_attribution": false, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [], "screenplay_preview": "（金陵）\n賈雨村抬手拦住黛玉，先把办事到权衡利害、最终屈从权势的关键转折点一句句讲明。\n黛玉与姐妹至李纨房中。\n贾雨村升任应天府审理人命案。\n原告陈述薛蟠倚财仗势打死人命。\n雨村发签捉人时被门子眼色阻止。\n门子与雨村葫芦庙旧识关系的揭示。\n门子使眼色阻止雨村发签。这是雨村从依法办事到权衡利害、最终屈从权势的关键转折点。" }, { "episode_id": "EP0003", "block_id": "EP0003B003", "status": "pass", "source_scene_ids": [ "S0030" ], "character_names": [ "門子", "賈雨村", "雨村", "襲人", "珍珠" ], "location_names": [ "都中", "金陵" ], "subject_anchor_ok": true, "action_anchor_ok": true, "location_anchor_ok": true, "dialogue_expected": true, "dialogue_needs_attribution": true, "dialogue_attribution_ok": true, "abstract_risk_codes": [], "fail_reasons": [], "warn_reasons": [], "screenplay_preview": "（都中）\n賈雨村：这层险处不是嘴上说说，真落到身上，躲不过就要伤身。\n門子：话既然说到这里，我今天就想听个准话。\n门子与雨村密室相认（旧识重逢）\n门子出示并逐条念诵护官符内容（贾、史、王、薛四大家族）\n门子递上护官符，贾雨村阅读/聆听后，意识到薛家案件的复杂性与自身处境的危险性。" } ] }